I'm wondering what you'd do in regards to the sky if this was your picture. There's info in the negative, some static, amorphous gray clouds...
Flashing just the top can give just enough tone to separate from the white border. If there is any detail in the sky, flashing will help bring the paper up to its threshold, making burning more effective.As for getting more detail in the sky: flashing your paper will make it grey, but often featureless, or at least the features will lack separation. That's what flashing does. If you want more of the darker tones to come through and still leave the whites really white, try a long burn with the highest contrast filter/setting you have (e.g., #5 filter). It will take a long time and you'll have to be careful of the darker things like buildings and trees that are silhouetted against the sky, but it can be quite gratifying if done well. This also works well in conjunction with a bit of flashing. The flashing gives the whites a tiny bit of substance and the high-contrast burn adds the darker details.
Photographers and non-photographers will often view images differently, as will those who have studied and used the skills of composition in any form of art. It can be tricky trying to grab the attention of, and communicate with, the different viewing behaviors. With the OP image -- some viewers will be drawn directly to the lion, nothing else in the image will really matter to them, and they'll chuckle, wondering where the baboon is with Simba. Others might applaud the use of the large empty informationless negative space that is swallowing the emptiness of public transportation ( it takes up almost half the image area, must be significant!) And so on.Just printed this one this week. I'm happy with the sky just being white and merging into the margins, even if I know that's not really technically correct.*
I'm wondering what you'd do in regards to the sky if this was your picture. There's info in the negative, some static, amorphous gray clouds...
Also, as a viewer, how do you perceive the picture with a border-less sky? Do you notice it? Does it bother you?
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Got a couple of hours in the darkroom today and tried the easiest suggestions given:
-increasing the contrast and cropping the sky a bit to improve the composition. I'm super happy with all the texture the increased contrast has brought forth.
-I also didn't realize how much I had cropped from the bottom and there's still more to the right of the image. I had cropped that side because of a tree. I burned the top quite a bit, but when I got to a burn that was 50% of the original exposure time and saw no change whatsoever, I abandoned it since I like it, need to save paper and most of you said it was ok
Will try the other suggestions in the coming weeks. Thanks again!
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Oh, and I found another photo of the same lion in a photo book. Those stairs are still in use, so I might try to recreate it (in the day time, with a random passerby and without cutting the lion's face)
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Split grade printing is definitely on the list of things to learn and try.Or Split Grade Printing: First bet the best print with the magenta filter only. Use that magenta exposure to add only the yellow filter to get the best print possible. Then based on the magenta exposure and the yellow exposure, start burning and dodging.
Split grade printing is definitely on the list of things to learn and try.
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