First, I re-read your spreadsheet and now understand how you computed the weight of NaOH.
Regarding DTPA: The patent might have too little. Here are two comparisons from my notes:
(1) The MSDS for DDX states that 1-5% of the concentrate is DTPA-5Na. Based on its specific gravity, that is at least 13 g. It's diluted 1+4, which is 2.6 g/L in working solution. At least, and probably higher.
(2) Fuji Patent 6878510 specifies 2 g/L of DTPA-5Na, twice Kodak's XTOL patent.
These two data suggest that your 3.37 g/L is closer to what Kodak ships than 1 g/L.
If I were cloning Xtol as you are, I'd boost DTPA-5Na to Mowrey's 3.37 g and raise the pH to 8.2 by adding NaOH or s. carbonate.
Mark