How exactly would the Zuiko 90mm have improved this image? I'm curious.
You're asking a question that would be very difficult to answer, since
a.) Your lens usually doens't matter, it's all about the light, composition, accurate focus
b.) One would need to construct a controlled test, with the same subject, to "see" differences, otherwise comparison would be meaningless.
I am pretty sure that your 85mm is a fantastic lens. Really. Just note that the Zuiko - as far as lenses go - is quite abnormally "special" in it's rendering. But these are subtle aspects. Also, I guarantee you that the Zuiko, with its floating optical system that continuously corrects abberrations at all focus distances (unlike your Hex 85mm, which is optimised for infinity) would produce technically higher resolution that whatever you could have produced with that portrait, but this is not visible in normal viewing sizes, so it doesn't really "matter".
In my photograph of the cat that I posted earlier (can't believe I just said that! But it's hopefully a "different" cat photo to what people typically post) the Zuiko actually resolves to the limits of what Fomapan 100 can resolve, right in the bottom-left corner, and this at f/2.0 and f/2.8.
There are few lenses that can do that at any aperture, and fewer still that can do it at such a close distance, and fewer still that can do it at f/2.0. This image, also, in a 12x16in optical print, is sharp to grain level (taken at f/2.0). This photo was a nightmare test for smooth bokeh, and most other lenses (well, ones that are capable of so clearly resolving the micro-details on the leaf, in anyway) would have produced sharp, bright edges to the out-of-focus highlights.
There are many, many excellent lenses in this world. The Zuiko 90 Macro is just pretty high up on that list... With slow film, it blurs the visible distinction between 35mm and medium format, at medium print sizes. And it's supremely versatile.