Thanks again for your answers
@xkaes : You're probably right. Honestly, I find it hard to even call that area "in focus", but it's definitely sharper than the rest. It's also definitely not what I wanted in focus

But as long as the gear works, I'm happy. I can deal with having to work on my technique
@snusmumriken : As soon as I move out of here (at the end of the month), I'll start shooting film again, and I have quite a few rolls of HP5 in the fridge so yeah, I'll do that
@Chan Tran : I don't know why it's so low in resolution. It's the same scan from the lab that I always use. The TIFF file they sent me is 18 Mo, and the Jpg out of LR is around 6 Mo, like all the other files. My settings are 100% and 300 dpi for export. And the pictures from the same roll are mostly fine. I checked on the latest roll I shot with the EOS Elan and the 85mm, and the scans are 20 Mo and the export files 4 Mo...
@grain elevator : Your analysis is right, in my opinion. The "ah, men" and "we're alive" pictures are definitely not super sharp, and I most certainly missed the focus a little bit, but they're sharp enough for my taste, compared to the other 2 at least. I added one taken with the EOS Elan and the 85mm F/1.8 for comparison (autofocus, of course), on a subject that was posing : it's clearly sharper. Not nearly as much as what I get with digital files, but I really don't mind.
@bernard_L : yes, it's probably a combination of eyesight, misfocus, and wrong settings for the situation. All of which I can work on. No, you won't get some flak for suggesting an AF camera

I actually own 2 (EOS 300 and EOS Elan 7), which have given me good results. I just don't enjoy shooting on those two as much as I do on older cameras... Finally, it's not really the lab's fault if the results are poor. I decided to push the FP4, and I asked for Adonal... So, it's on me mostly
@xkaes :
- I see just fine with my glasses, I'm just not used to wearing them when I take pictures. For quite some time, I was using an EOS R, and I probably got spoiled because the AF is so good that you really don't have to check anything... I just have to accept my old age and wear my glasses

- Both my OM cameras have split focusing screen
- The other 2 advice I definitely need to pay attention to
