Alan Edward Klein
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The women seem to enjoying themselves as well.
I thought of this thread when scanning the film I developed today, and thought I'd share how my thoughts went. I quite liked the shot attached here, but after a little while I noticed how the lamp-post is right behind the head of one of these ladies. Then I thought: I had time - maybe 10 or 15 sec - to choose how to frame the shot and when to press the button. So what I've got is the moment when instinctively I felt everything was as right as it was going to be. Naturally, after the event, one can search for compositional 'rules' that are upheld or broken. So I find - with some surprise and a sense of seeing afresh - that there are two diagonals: one explicitly marked by the railings and paralleled by the shadows, one implicit from BL corner to TR corner. The ladies are oriented towards the intersection of those diagonals, marked by the lamp-post. X marks the spot. If there is a rule about lamp-posts growing out of people's heads, I've definitely transgressed; but I think there's enough tonal contrast to minimise any visual ambiguity. And finally, who cares? It was a lovely walk, late on a sunny afternoon, and I like this reminder of it. I'm not expecting a knock on the door from the Rules Police. They have Bigger Fish to fry.
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Sorry, Matt, but how does that relate to the pole-in-head issue?Try a higher aspect ratio crop - something like this:
I thought of this thread when scanning the film I developed today, and thought I'd share how my thoughts went. I quite liked the shot attached here, but after a little while I noticed how the lamp-post is right behind the head of one of these ladies. Then I thought: I had time - maybe 10 or 15 sec - to choose how to frame the shot and when to press the button. So what I've got is the moment when instinctively I felt everything was as right as it was going to be. Naturally, after the event, one can search for compositional 'rules' that are upheld or broken. So I find - with some surprise and a sense of seeing afresh - that there are two diagonals: one explicitly marked by the railings and paralleled by the shadows, one implicit from BL corner to TR corner. The ladies are oriented towards the intersection of those diagonals, marked by the lamp-post. X marks the spot. If there is a rule about lamp-posts growing out of people's heads, I've definitely transgressed; but I think there's enough tonal contrast to minimise any visual ambiguity. And finally, who cares? It was a lovely walk, late on a sunny afternoon, and I like this reminder of it. I'm not expecting a knock on the door from the Rules Police. They have Bigger Fish to fry.
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Sorry, Matt, but how does that relate to the pole-in-head issue?
In both images - the original image that brought rise to this thread and in your image - the vertical line is both long and dominating. It strongly directs attention into the head in front of it.
By substantially shortening the vertical line you decrease both its prominence and how it seems to "split in two" the head in front of it.
In addition, by making the image appear more strongly bottom weighted and horizontal, the viewer's attention to the head that is apparently "split" is reduced, in favour of the stronger angled left-to-right lines.
Ms. Leibovitz and her editor/art director didn't have quite the same options available to her, but one can see some of the same reduced effect if one does something similar to her image:
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Yeees, I see what you mean, but by removing context I think it makes the problem worse. If you know it the seam in a back cloth, it is less intrusive. If it looks like an alien antenna, it’s quite unsettling. Same for my lamp post: if you can see that it is a lamp post in the mid-distance, it’s somehow ok.
I just removed that pole seamlessly in less than a minute with generative fill, but if @snusmumriken is in the darkroom it would take a heroic effort.Imagine what even the tiniest amount of photoshopping could have done for that image... eliminated the need for this thread.![]()
All of which highlights why the "rule" is better seen as a caution
The "positive" rules - which should be read as recommendations - are worthwhile to learn.
Because they distill shared experience.
Rule of thirds, leading lines, s-curves, etc. - they all represent observations of things that often work well.
Emphasis on "often".
So if you are trying to accomplish something particular, you can often employ them to assist in constructing your narrative.
the original image that brought rise to this thread and in your image - the vertical line is both long and dominating
the Kent State photo
Of course, there is always Aperture's Photo No-Nos: Meditations on What Not to Photograph.
That was discussed at length elsewhere.
I think there is a difference between intentionally following a rule and taking a good photograph that happens to conform to a "rule" you may or may not have been aware of. As I mentioned above, each photographer looks for what is visually coherent to them. Sometimes that coincides with the "rule". Many times it doesn't.
In photography we each translate the world in our own, personal, visual language. We're not looking for "what works" for all, but for what makes sense to us, hoping that it will also to others.
To my mind, those “rules” are characteristics or principles that can be used to help explain/describe why some pictures are good, or better than others. Shared wisdom. Does anybody know who started using the term, “rules” in that context? Probably the composition police. LOL
Our brains process information in a certain way. Some of it is pleasing; some of it isn't. The "rules" reflect what the brain finds pleasing—most of the time. One rule, generally accepted but not often stated, is that the subject should be in focus. Out of focus shots annoy us. So the "rule" is focus your camera. Of course, there are times when you want objects out of focus, or when it relates to depth of field, you only want certain parts in focus. So you ignore the rule or modify it. But focused shots looks better generally. Out of focus shots are rejected by most people.
It's similar with music. There are rules there too. If you play discordant chords, our brain rejects them. Most of us know these "rules" intuitively even if we have no concept of music theory or can't even read music or play an instrument. It doesn't sound right if the rules are violated. The same with photography, painting, etc. Certain arrangements are more pleasing, others are less pleasing. That's all the rules are, describing our innate preferences.
I thought of this thread when scanning the film I developed today, and thought I'd share how my thoughts went.... I'm not expecting a knock on the door from the Rules Police. They have Bigger Fish to fry.
“Breaking all the rules” is imposing a rule.
To my mind, those “rules” are characteristics or principles that can be used to help explain/describe why some pictures are good, or better than others.
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