johnnywalker
Subscriber
David,
All the arguments about privacy aside, I found your letter basically unreadable. It's much too long, repetitive, wandering and has too much irrelevant information. I found myself "scanning" it half way through the first paragraph. It would have much more effect if it were considerably shortened and presented in a logical manner. As it is, it will end up in the waste basket.
All the arguments about privacy aside, I found your letter basically unreadable. It's much too long, repetitive, wandering and has too much irrelevant information. I found myself "scanning" it half way through the first paragraph. It would have much more effect if it were considerably shortened and presented in a logical manner. As it is, it will end up in the waste basket.