It would, as always, be more helpful to see a photo of the negative. However, it could be something as simple as dirty chemicals and worn-out fixer. You are filtering the stop-bath and fixer before each use? If not, then that would be a good idea.
The fixer and stop which you used previously can be dumped, to eliminate one variable in your next film development, and in the future filter them directly before re-use. With this film, re-fix in fresh fixer, as the 'pale' areas in the scan could be slight traces of remaining silver-halide emulsion in the film.
"Wash with tap water in between my first and final hypo clear washes" is rather unclear. Why use hypo-clear with film, it achieves nothing. In any case, hypo-clear should not be a final wash under any circumstances, including for paper. The product is usually used only for fibre-based paper where it changes the fixer by-products in the paper base in to a more soluble form, for easier washing ie. hypo-clear before washing. The C41 film process does use a stabiliser as the last step, but that has absolutely nothing to do with the development of your roll of film.
A final rinse of distilled-water (with or without a weak wetting-agent), giving a few minutes for the tap-water in the gelatine to be replaced by the distilled-water, will reduce drying marks considerably but most of the strange artifacts in/on your neg don't appear to be drying marks.
Edit: It would also be a good idea to move this topic in to the "(there was a url link here which no longer exists)" forum, as the question is not really anything to do with the camera type.