Fozzle
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Received 'Rainy Day' from Delphine, very clever, I really like it, thanks.
There's a stack of cards on my desk that keeps nagging me to comment on them. And rightfully so.
rince's fleeting moment, the photo and the story come together to form a whole that is greater than the sum of its parts. One detail though, from a keen observer: it looks like a mirror image, from the text on the lock. Works for me, but I'm just wondering if it was meant that way.
There is a good spread of tones from a suitably washed out upper corner leading down to the diagonally opposite detail-less shadow of the patrons jacket. A niggling detail is the bright edge of light under the table. I think the image might have been a bit tighter if that part of the frame was cropped out. I found it tended to pull focus.
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Great catchI just liked the composition better this way around and I hoped it would not be to obstrusive. In the end this is how I saw the image in the first place when looking on my groundglass
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Fozzle -- I had a little robot toy that looked like that when I was a wee bit. What we couldn't figure out was if it was a multiple exposure, taken through a display case window or just a window, or if was still beaming over!! The ambiguous shapes throughout make you think you know what you are looking at, but then you say 'no, that's not it ...'
As does anikin's not-so-everyday shot of a utility pole in the middle of the road. Funny thing, that. The paper also has a nice feel and look to it, what paper is it?
Next week: Sign up starts for Round 29
Next week: Sign up starts for Round 29
I've neglected to post which cards I've gotten
...[/I]This was a lot of fun everyone! I love getting these in the mail. Sure beats bills. I may not be able to participate in the next one. If my promotion goes through I'll be moving to NYC (well actually Jersey) where I may or may not be able to have a darkroom. Crossing my fingers to be able to afford a 2 bathroom apartment or even an extra closet.
Pipoca -- I really like the detail--I am a sucker for landscape and landscape details. I constantly have to tell myself to get closer. I know what you mean about the allergy to the tree--any time I prune our cedar-type bushes, I break out. I think there's an aromatic oil in them.
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