Hi Nicole,
I need to ask what film you're using. IMO, the quality of the neg is the most important part. If you have a good neg, the rest is much easier. It's hard to judge the technical quality of a photo here on my computer screen, but I like the composition.
I'm a fan of traditional emulsions, Tri-X, APX 100, etc., and I am NOT a fan of T-grain films. I've never had good results from the T-grains and I've souped them in everything from Ethol 90 to D-23. The T-grains certainly have fine grain, but as I tell my students, if you were to hang one of your photos at an exhibit, grain you see from 6 inches away, tonality, lighting and composition scream at you from across the room.
I used t-grained film because it is finer grain, but I went back to trad films because T-grains just don't have the punch, the snap.
I've seen some nice work done with T-grain films, but always wonder how the image would look if done on a trad film.
That's what works for me and it may not work for you. Just my $.02