My first halfway decent vandyke brown.
Looks pretty good to me!
it doesn't have as much sparkle as I'd like.
Can you define what 'sparkle' means to you? What are you missing in this print?
I think I need to make denser negatives
The first thing to do is to determine the exposure time, through a blank piece of inkjet film, that will give the (desired) maximum density (dmax) of your printing process. If dmax is unsatisfactory and additional exposure doesn't make the dmax any higher, then work on the printing process first and forget about the whole inkjet stuff until you fix that. There's no sense in trying to linearize a printing process that's not consistently working.
With 'printing process' I mean in this case the Van Dyke Brown output process, not the inkjet print.
but am wondering if I'm at the limit of what my Epson and the Inkjet Press transparency film can render.
Almost certainly not a problem. Epson pigment inks can easily build waaaaay more density than you need for this.
I looked at the Bostick & Sullivan curve and discarded it as it removed too much detail and flattened out the contrast. I found that letting the printer instead of Photoshop manage the print worked much better.
I think you need to read a few texts on linearization. There's a couple of approaches and accompanying tools available.
Easy Digital Negatives and
Precision Digital Negatives are popular approaches. Hands-down the best text I've read on the subject is Calvin Grier's "
Calibration for Alternative Photographic Processes".
I set the media for premium glossy and the rendering intent at saturation.
Epson pigment
matte black ink builds more UV density than
photo black. You will generally get the best results if you set the paper setting to 'Epson archival matte'.
Consider using QTR; it has a learning curve, but will give you virtually full control over how the printer uses the various ink channels. It's far, far more flexible than the Epson print dialog - although can get perfectly good results with just that, too.
I am wondering if the sodium thiosulfate solution might have been slightly weaker than it should have been.
See remark above; first nail the target process. You're now juggling a host of variables and the "guess & let's see" approach will throw you for a loop. That's not a possibility, it's
guaranteed to happen. You can still get decent prints even if you poke around quasi-randomly, but most of the time, people who do this end up optimizing for one particular kind of image and then get stuck again later on, or they get lost in the woods again (and again and again) once a parameter changes somewhere.
I just read that Fixxons is supposed to be as good and much cheaper.
Pictorico and Fixxons are virtually identical, and both are only very marginally better than the cheap, generic screen printing inkjet film linked to by
@gbroadbridge That film, btw, will work perfectly fine for what you're doing. The only meaningful difference between Pictorico and Fixxons on one side and the cheap screen printing stuff on the other, is that the former will accept a few percent more ink. However, for a process like Van Dyke that's irrelevant as the cheap film can take way more ink than you need.
I really recommend Calvin's eBook series. You don't even need to read or adopt all of it. Just give the first couple of chapters (the ones about monochrome) a read. Regardless of whether you end up using Calvin's tools or exact approach, he does a great job at explaining the basics in a robust as well as easily accessible manner. It's well worth the money.