Thanks - that helps.
The woman in negative #22 is definitely under-exposed. I think your camera/meter was fooled by the brightly lit background, and set the camera to more properly expose that background. Then when you went to make a positive image out of it the women in the foreground was lightened too much.
If you make the whole thing darker the colours and contrast will probably improve, but you will still be left with a too dark person.
There are a few techniques that could be used at the darkroom printing stage or digital post-processing stage that could improve the results a bit, but as you are dealing with this digitally, any such discussion belongs in the digital part of the site.
FWIW, the negatives look good, and if you were looking for pictures of the background, I expect you would have been very happy with the results.
The woman in negative #22 is definitely under-exposed. I think your camera/meter was fooled by the brightly lit background, and set the camera to more properly expose that background. Then when you went to make a positive image out of it the women in the foreground was lightened too much.
If you make the whole thing darker the colours and contrast will probably improve, but you will still be left with a too dark person.
There are a few techniques that could be used at the darkroom printing stage or digital post-processing stage that could improve the results a bit, but as you are dealing with this digitally, any such discussion belongs in the digital part of the site.
FWIW, the negatives look good, and if you were looking for pictures of the background, I expect you would have been very happy with the results.