I uploaded the original raw file, if anyone wants to play with it.
I have it open, but the highlights look really funny. Are you sure the film is properly fixed?
Also, the blue channel seems to be clipped in the digital file; I'm running out of steam on the blue highlights - they blow out:
I think you may need to give a little bit more exposure when digitizing the negatives so you end up with more headroom on the blue channel. I think it'll make color balancing the images easier, the slope-off into the specular highlights will become more smooth and the overall risk of ending up with out-of-gamut colors is lower.
Here's the RGB histogram in my RAW converter:
Note how the blue channel is all bunched up to the left. You've got some room on the right on both R and G, so I'd suggest using that in order to give blue a little more room. Dial in 2/3 stop more exposure, see how that goes.
I also have to admit that I have some doubts about the Cinestil CS41 developer used. The colors are just...wonky. I can't get them to balance out, and what I need to do to get close to OK, is very non-linear:
What certainly doesn't help is the uneven illumination of the negative, that throws the color balance into different directions across the frame. Look at e.g. the sunlit tarmac along the left edge of the frame vs. the center of the frame above the saddle of the bike. Here's a sample of both areas:
I balanced the light-midtones to give a more or less neutral hue on the tarmac, but then it goes lavender in the left and right of the image.
All this doesn't show up very clearly in the original image posted in #1, but that's mostly because it's very desaturated. Crank up the saturation and the same problem pops up, so it's not something to do with my RAW converter etc. (Also note that Portra 800 isn't all that desaturated if you optically print it onto RA4 paper. It renders quite a rich palette in my experience, so I wouldn't consider it a 'flat' film or something along those lines.)
There's a lot going on here and I
think there's some room for improvement.