water abstract

I'm wondering how much tonal range could be achieved just out of the black water. Maybe try cropping the white a little at a time til it's gone to see if another crop works. Maybe the lip of the black, leaving just the small white dip? Good Work.
Cheers
The Rat

Yup, great vision comes to mind. Sorry (actually not sorry) can't suggest any improvements; it just works for me.

Later edit: Just keep coming back to it ...... marvellous!

This is very similar to a photograph by Minor White entitled "Stony Brook State park, New York", plate 22 in the book "The Eye That Shapes". It has always been one of my favorites of his. High praise, indeed.

-Mike

Mike

This is very similar to a photograph by Minor White entitled "Stony Brook State park, New York", plate 22 in the book "The Eye That Shapes".

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Don't think that I have seen it, but will visit the library today to try and view

Thanks for the kind words

Phill

This is a great image. I really like the inverted/upside down perspective implied by the flow of the water both down (away from the eye) and up the photo. But the image holds its own as an image and not just a picture of some water and rocks. Wonderful!

Superb Phil. Great abstract.

Mark