Meadow

Meadow

A quiet landscape with remains from old times farming activities. This picture was taken an early morning just after sunrise (summer). It depicts an old meadow for the farms livestock.

Critique on composition, technique, printing etc is most welcome!
Location
Sweden
Equipment Used
Pentax 67ii
Exposure
With tripod
Film & Developer
FP4+, D761+1
Paper & Developer
Ilford Classic, Moersch Eco 4812
Digital Post Processing Details
Reproduced using dSLR. Slight sharpening and white balancing.
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  1. Yes
Personally, I find that as presented the center of interest is the open grassy space. I'd probably use either the logs alone, or crop them mostly out of the frame. There are a lot of interesting elements, but more editing in the choice of subject would have produced a stronger picture. Sometimes a place just swamps the compositional sense. It's a delicate balance between feeling a response to a subject and thinking how to portray it.
 
Grahamp, Thank you for your valuable and honest feedback, much appreciated! I understand and agree to what you are saying. I remember me spending a lot of time on the location trying to find a strong composition, but my artistic skill failed me again. Rather than capturing a small detail, I opted for this composition; my main aim was to capture the landscape rather than a small element of it. (I am not trying to argue on your feedback - just describe the history about the photo in a neutral tone). One again, thanks for your valuable feedback!
 
I see what grahamp above says -- that 'space' catches the eye and you think it needs 'something' in it, but over all a good photo.
 

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Image metadata

Device
NIKON CORPORATION NIKON D300
Aperture
ƒ/5.6
Focal length
50.0 mm
Exposure time
1/15 second(s)
ISO
200
Filename
ire_1920x1080_sRGB.jpg
File size
1.5 MB
Date taken
Thu, 24 January 2019 10:54 PM
Dimensions
1242px x 1080px

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