Empire State Bldg; Paper Negative

I've been looking at this for 2 days and still don't know if it "works" or not. Looking to make an image 'evoking the dawn of photography' It also has to be good. This is made from a paper negative I made from the original Holga negative. All feedback and criticism welcome.
Thanks in advance
Location
NYC
Equipment Used
Holga
Exposure
yes
Film & Developer
TMax /D76 1:1 then Agfa 312/LPD 1:4
Paper & Developer
Agfa MCC Lpd 1:4

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Jersey Vic
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empirepapernegative.jpg
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