Think it lacks any intensity. I like the simple geometry, but needs more contrast also the camera needs to come back a bit and a better angle......also need a better looking model.
@Eric Rose Thanks, still working on my performing arts piece "Conversations of the Socially Inept" or how to upset an "artist" , apparently mentioning male grooming (back, sack and crack waxing) is offensive to someone in my alternative photography meet up group. One of the platinum palladium fellas needs to build a bridge and get over it. Seriously (last comment probably makes little sense), interesting topic (didnt really put a terrible lot of thought into the self esteem part) am interested in the widening social divide/ social isolation/ social realism type work as a long term goal. Appreciate the comment, hope my reply wasn't too disjointed.
@jtk Ha, prefer the standard type, although the wedding tackle doesn't get much of a run much these days its still important to maintain good air circulation, specially here in the sub tropics.