A few of random thoughts ...
* 0.68mm might be on the large side for 124mm "focal length." Pinhole Designer comes up with numbers around 0.40 to 0.50mm, depending on the magic constant used.
* I am wondering what your black tubing is made of? If it has a glossy surface on the inside, perhaps internal flare is over exposing the mid-section. Lining it with some felt or black construction paper rolled and placed around the inside of the tube might help with that.
* I am assuming here that the tubing used is relatively large so that there is a clear sight line from the pinhole to the periphery of the active film frame. Some SLR lenses use retro-focus and other tricks on the back end of the lens which can allow the clear area of the lens mount to be relatively small. On some of my home brew cameras I've been amazed how what looked like a large clearance hole actually clipped the corners of the image, albeit this was with 90º or so angle of view.
* It is also possible a mix of the pinhole plate thickness and the upset from dimpling might cause some vignetting. A really thick plate several times the pinhole diameter results in a sort of cylindrical bore that can produce really significant vignetting almost like looking through a tunnel.
* I'm not sure if any trickery was used in supplying your image, but I think if anything, it's over exposed. I tried downloading one of them and doing a bit of PhotoShoppery and thought it looked better cranked down a little bit. It is pretty normal for pinhole shots to have some light fall-off toward the edges, although it is normally more obvious with wide angles of coverage. Your numbers have a relatively narrow angle of view, so fall-off should be modest.
Ah well, the experimentation is part of the fun!