Welcome to APUG! I think the shots look good, another note is that more contrast sometimes creates the perception of sharpness, and here thanks to a dreary day, the contrast is relatively modest. As bvy suggests, the wavy stuff may be film flatness or something not quite lined up right in loading the camera. I have never seen a Zero Image at arm's length, but in the Worldwide Pinhole Photography Day submissions on the WPPD website, work done with Zero Image cameras is usually among the most impressive.
I assume the 69 is for 6x9cm frames, therefore 120 film. In my own (limited) experience, larger formats tend to appear sharper. (Someday I should go through the math behind pinholes and see if that idea has any theoretical support!) Anyway, I'd say you are off to a good start.