well, its kind of like this. . . . In order to to asses your negative, it would be nice for you if you had a densimeter. your image "problems" can be attributed to many problems, or any combination there of. my suspicion is in your development. as an example, your thermometer ? did it suffer the fate as so many of mine have? they do go bad! was/were contamination/ over concentration/ brain fart? agitating too much? For the scene( contrast range) it appears as though you should have subtracted time so your highlights do not build up so fast. poor metering/ dysfunctional light meter? sometimes a "false positive" meter reading does happen, did you set your ISO to the proper level, did it get changed accidentally? It appears in the scan, that the original scene was quite contrasty, that being said. . . . I suggest you go out and re shoot! if that image is something that you are committed to. ( p.s. I am not affirming or denying the artistic quality of the image, just trying to be an honest broker!)