Bob, a bit of a rush, isn't it? Not sure how it looks but I would wager that shadows are showing full textures like you have not seen with normal agitation and edges look like they have been cut with a razor. Any edge effects where light edges meet dark in the scene?
Since you have had good luck on the first try, don't change more than one variable at a time. Use this dilution and work out a full set of sbr numbers with correct times. Remember, the print is what is important. A print that isn't just "right" is just as valuable as one which is, because you can use the information to build your data and plot the film's curve.
I don't own a densitometer but you don't need one to make the tests, it just takes a bit more film and time without one. If you will be patient, take notes on the shot, development, temperature, print results and see what happens, in about 6 shots you will have a decent enough range of values to make good guesses based on existing data. You build on what you know. A densitometer lets you do it at one time.
I use a graph made on 1/4" graph paper. Left side is the y axis in sbr numbers from 6-12 or whatever, in 1/2" increments. Bottom edge is the x axis with times plotted in similar 1/2" increments. With stand development you may need to tape three sheets of paper together to do the plot as times will be on the long side for the low sbr numbers.
My basic method is to take the shot, guess at the time (based on previous shots which have worked exactly as planned with sbr numbers I already know), then do the print. I evaluate the zone 3 and zone 7 placements and record the results. For example, if the sbr number was 8 2/3 and your time guessed was 55 minutes, how did it print? If the print was about a half stop too flat, you have valuable information. The development time was too short. Make a tick mark at 9+ and 55 minutes. This works well enough to put a french curve into play after a few shots and will give you a curve based on a given paper, film, developer and dilution. It really is that simple. The french curve acts to average out your times, because the guesses are never correct, but the curve is able to relate all of the random points into a single line. This may make the sensitometrists cringe and roll their eyes, but it works.
After a while, it becomes a fun challenge to play with the scenes and look for different light to capture and print. Great job on your first film and can't wait to see the print. tim