In my opinion this has exquisite tonality. You could consider a higher contrast filter, like a 3.5 to get the crisper whites you seem to be looking for. But I really think that these muted tones are very beautiful in their own right. I don't feel as if anything is lacking from this print, at all. Well done!
- Thomas
It is always helpful, for someone else to look...
I tried a 3 and 3.5 filter, but the Dark colors of the ottoman he is leaning on and his one piece pajama, came out too dark with no shadow in the folds. I even tried to dodge his face to get the brilliance, but then I lost the midtones of his face and the small shadow indentations of his fingertips, so I just used the 2.5 filter with no dodging. Maybe I could try it again..this time with slight dodging...
A grade 2 paper or a #2 filter on variable contrast paper is considered normal contrast, and should print with a full range of tones using a negative developed normally and exposed to an average contrast subject. The dynamic range of an average subject fits on the normally developed film which matches the average paper grade. If your average negatives fit well on the average paper, then you have room with the outliers to fit them on more or less contrasty grades of paper.You mention using a #2 filter as a basis. Why?
NOT BAD AT ALL! As Thomas said. A very good effort.
But I gotta say, all the advice is very well intended but it's given by people who already know how. I've taught beginning Futo-gruphy now for about 35 years in Community Colleges, and I've learned a few things over that time about how people learn these skills. In my humble opinion, if you get into split grade printing and other advanced techniques as a rank beginner, it is going to be very hard for you to learn the basics which, if you have them, would make it much easier for you to learn those techniques later on, and not that much later at that. Of course you CAN learn that way, but you will waste a lot of time and blow through a LOT of materials -- you know, $$$.
I don't encourage my students to burn or dodge, even, until they demonstrate that they can handle exposure and contrast. Why? Because if I don't throw out the sea-anchor to keep them from just going for it, very often they try to fix things that ain't broke, and what they end up with is broke things that ain't fixed. I had one student who insisted on burning/dodging everything instead of learning to control contrast with the filters. In one lousy quarter (ten weeks) he went through $750 worth of paper without producing a single convincing print! I told him that our department offered courses in painting and drawing; since that was what he was trying to do, why not just take the appropriate course? It would be a LOT easier! So, my advice? Don't bother with any burning and dodging YET. Learn to do a simple edge burn, about 20% in from each side, with every print. That will get you used to the proceedure.
So, how to print -- BASIC.
First, take a strip of your paper, and cut it in half. Put one half under something or back in the box, which close. Take the other half out into the light, or turn the light on. Not for long, just enough to be sure that it's completely exposed. Develop these pieces at the same time you will the prints. This will give you a reference for comparison. Our brains don't do well with absolutes (you know, like GOOD and EVIL -- well, black and white). If you don't have these to refer to, your brain will tend to make what you have done LOOK like black, and LOOK like white, but having the patches will help you verify that your brain isn't tricking you.
Next, establish the lightest tone in which you wish to retain detail. I would suggest that for this, you consider (in the image you've shown) the highlights in the hair and the catchlights (little bright spots) in the eyes. With a #2(!!!!) filter, print a test to achieve the correct value. It doesn't have to match your white patch if you don't think it should be pure white. I suspect that the catchlights may be pure white, that the hair won't be. Your print has these values quite a bit too low, if we are looking for a "normal" print. I'll qualify "normal": Which member of your family is normal? But try to do it straight for now. Later you can (and I hope you will) get into interpretation, but let's establish a baseline.
ONLY THEN, when you have achieved the correct value in the lights, do you even look at the blacks (I sometimes take a paper punch and make a hole to look through in the patches, so that the local tones are isolated from context). Compare the black patch with something that you think should be close to a solid black - but most of the time, black areas should have detail in them but they ought to contain a full black somewhere. If your black is not black enough, you need to increase contrast. If the black is so deep that it erases detail that you can see in the negative, you need to lower the contrast. When you have made that determination, change your filter if necessary (probably will be). Test again FOR THE WHITE and, only if it is right, check the black as before. Since you are beginning, you will need, probably, to go back and forth a few times. My students often find that in making their first print, it usually takes several hours. It will get a lot faster when you have a base of experience.
Please get comfortable with this; then you can burn, dodge, split your filtration, build fantastic developers, pre or post flash, etc. and you will have the ability to actually identify what is really happening. Resist the temptation to try to cut corners; one decision at a time is what you need right now. You know, it is like being in a chemistry lab running an experiment - a print is an experiment. Cut all the variables, so you are only working on solving one at a time. One of the chemistry instructors took my class, and as we were going through this process, he asked "In this experiment you just did...?" I loved that.
Drinking wine with the neighbors helps. I process my paper in Beers. Well, that's a developer that a fellow named Dr. Roland F. Beers invented. Not advisable to drink it.
Good luck. Have fun.
Larry Bullis
Here is a basic question because I don't know.
How can I expose the print for the whites and the blacks at the same time?
I think you are telling me to expose with a #2 to get a baseline print. Then increase the filter and expose the print over his face and hair only, and block the rest of the paper from the enlarger light...then develop the print.
Once I get "that" to where I want it to resemble the white paper (reference sheet), then go back with another paper sheet and do it again for the black areas, like his pajama's.
Once I have the blacks represented correctly with as dark as I can make it without losing the details in the blackness.
I in my beginner knowledge and practice I was exposing the print with a higher filter number to get the blacks dark enough by way of exposure and bringing the "whites" to a lighter shade by dodging the light to gain a lighter face without losing the details of his skin...
You get to go back over it and reconstruct. Keep us posted.Would this be correct ?
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