Thanks all for the help. She's not a model but just a friend, either way I'm sure she'll be stoked by the compliment. I was thinking about the painting the eye but wasn't sure whether it would stick out. Also, my hands aren't steady at all, which is why I got into photography and not painting
I think I'm going to try dodging her right eye (looking it at, the left side) and paint in a small pupil next to where it really is.
pentaxuser and Mike: the scanned image doesn't show it, but on the full print it gives her more of a googly-eyed look rather than a mischievous look. If it were that, it would be awesome. I think dodging out that rogue shadow will fix it though, and give it the mischievous look. I'll probably be going dark tonight and will re-scan in the morning.
again, thank you all.