I posted the (there was a url link here which no longer exists) in another post yesterday, I still have a test print somewhere but the colour was quite different to your example - close to the colour of copper metal itself
like this Ilford example. I must have used Potassium Citrate which I'd have bought from Hogg Laboratory Supplies.
The formula you have is about a quarter the strength of the one I used that maybe why the toning isn't a red-copper. The BJP formula you used does say the toning passes through stages. I wouldm't have tought it would make much difference using Sodium Citrate instead of Potassium Citratre..
You can make Potassium Citrate from Citric acid and Potassium Cabonate, a 1 litre 20% solution needs 149g Citric acid and 160.64g Potassium Carbonate, you dissolve the Citric acid first then slowly add the Carbonate the reaction releases carbon dioxide, finally check the pH to make sure it's neutral.
Ian