I don't know about what you were trying to get, but I think the end result is what many folks would love to get. Well, if you are older at least. I'm pushing 70 and when I see this shot it reminds me of being 11 or 12 again and seeing one of my long deceased aunt's and uncle's in the same chairs, wearing the same clothes, shot with the same Kodak Instamatic and the b&w film process by me when I was 10 or 11 yrs. old. To me it has the look ("Americana 60's) that I can relate to. All in all, I'd say well done.