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8 X 10 platinum print
Location
Encino
Equipment Used
Century No 2
Gustavo, overall lovely print. Intriguing finish and texture. I love the use of her hands, and the look on her face makes for interesting portrait. I would suggest less headroom. About half of what you are giving us. If this were my own, I might consider also trimming the lower portion. A little below the triangle of her pubic hair we see the shadow of her thighs, I would include some of that, but not to much more. The lower portion of the thighs/legs adds very little to the photo, and I believe distracts from the overall beauty. I might also then narrow it cropping back to the original 8x10 dimensions. Thank you for sharing your work here.

Jim
 
Gustavo, overall lovely print. Intriguing finish and texture. I love the use of her hands, and the look on her face makes for interesting portrait. I would suggest less headroom. About half of what you are giving us. If this were my own, I might consider also trimming the lower portion. A little below the triangle of her pubic hair we see the shadow of her thighs, I would include some of that, but not to much. The lower portion of the thighs/legs adds very little to the photo, and I believe distracts from the overall beauty. I might also then narrow it cropping back to the original 8x10 dimensions. Thank you for sharing your work here.

Jim
 

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