Woman's Face

Woman's face with dark background.
Location
Newcastle, WA
Equipment Used
Mamiya RB67 with Studio Flash
Paper & Developer
Ilford
I like the expression a lot. The composition works nice here.
The only thing that I want to point out is that the darkest areas are dark grey and not black. More contrast can help that while making the hair stand more out from the background.

My 2 cents.
 
I agree with the good Priest here, a high contrast would make this photo really great!
 

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Category
Critique Gallery
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halfstop
Date added
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Image metadata

Filename
mandy-halfface-dark-cropped.jpg
File size
116.5 KB
Date taken
Tue, 04 October 2005 11:06 PM
Dimensions
485px x 650px

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