Windblown II

An alternate frame. Comments and critiques are always welcome
Location
Rooftop of my building
Equipment Used
Pentax 6x7, SMC 105/2.4
Exposure
EI100
Film & Developer
Ilford Delta 100, Kodak D-76 stock
Paper & Developer
Negative scan
Is this print for sale?
  1. Yes
I know the ying/yang of the black versus white is supposed to mean something but I see something else. I see Dali. The melted warp of a Dali painting has been manifested in the twisted bodies and flowing fabric.
 
I feel the left side needs to show slightly more. It makes me feel cramped. need about as much as you have on the right side. I like windblown's description
 
michael9793 said:
I feel the left side needs to show slightly more. It makes me feel cramped. need about as much as you have on the right side. I like windblown's description
You're absolutely right, the composition is cramped on that side. There's a building immediately outside of the frame that I was trying to exclude (you can see it in the other example I have posted). I should have moved my feet a bit. Thank you for your insight.
 

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