Windblown II

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  jp498

• Jan 22, 2014

I know the ying/yang of the black versus white is supposed to mean something but I see something else. I see Dali. The melted warp of a Dali painting has been manifested in the twisted bodies and flowing fabric.

 

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  michael9793

• Jan 23, 2014

I feel the left side needs to show slightly more. It makes me feel cramped. need about as much as you have on the right side. I like windblown's description

 

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  ignatiu5

• Jan 23, 2014

michael9793 said:

I feel the left side needs to show slightly more. It makes me feel cramped. need about as much as you have on the right side. I like windblown's description

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You're absolutely right, the composition is cramped on that side. There's a building immediately outside of the frame that I was trying to exclude (you can see it in the other example I have posted). I should have moved my feet a bit. Thank you for your insight.

 

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  bsdunek

• Jan 23, 2014

Ditto michael9793, otherwise very good. And, yes, I agree with jp498, there is a Dali look.

 

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  ignatiu5

• Feb 3, 2014

I lived in the Tampa Bay area for 3 years and never once made it to the Dali museum. I should try to rectify that the next time I'm down there.