Wild is the wind

• benjiboy

• Sep 10, 2019

It's a very good portrait of Mia who is a beautiful young girl, however, compositionally I think it would benefit from being cropped at the top to just over her head to bring her eyes into the top third of the frame and a commensurate amount of the left hand side

 

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  macfred

• Sep 10, 2019

@benjiboy Thank you, Sir - will try when printing.

 

• benjiboy

• Sep 10, 2019

@macfred
I know that it's not the critique gallery, but I really think it will improve it, and couldn't resist it.

 

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  macfred

• Sep 10, 2019

@benjiboy Nothing wrong with your suggestions - your welcome!

 

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  warden

• Sep 11, 2019

Very nice! The wind is a lovely addition here.

 

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  macfred

• Sep 11, 2019

@jawarden Thank you!