West Alton
tmharter

West Alton

Winter morning by the Mississippi River.

I am very new at this. One of my first 10 finished prints. Any constructive critiques are welcome. Thanks.
Location
West Alton, MO
Equipment Used
Canon AE-1, 50 mM/1.4
Exposure
f5.6 1/250
Film & Developer
Ilford Delta Pro 400; HC110
Paper & Developer
Ilford MGIV RC VC;
Lens Filter
#2
The left 1/3 of the print seems to be blown out and the right 2/3 seems a little too dark. Try reprinting and give more exposure (burn-in) the right portion and hold back the rest.

Dave
 
I noticed this but it was one of my first prints. before I learned to dodge and burn. I want to go back in redo it. The negative was like this too, what would cause that, any idea?
 
Looks to me like lens flare. Use a hood.
 
I agree with John's remarks. Also ..I think the print could have been a bit sharper. Or was it the scan? Otherwise ...I think you have an eye for a good picture.

Hans
 

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