Wedding shoot
Matt5791

Wedding shoot

This is from a wedding I shot in the Summer - the bride was getting ready before the event and this was strongly back lit by her bedroom window.

I realy like this shot, but I dont know about the dark bit on the right -should this be cropped out? any other observations gratefully received.
Location
Bride's bedroom, UK
Equipment Used
Nikon FE2, Nikkor 50mm f1.4
Exposure
I think, f2.8@1/250
Film & Developer
Ilford Delta 2300 @ 1600, ID11
Paper & Developer
Ilford MGIV RC, Ilford Ilfospeed RT dev. (now called Nova multispeed)
Lens Filter
none
Generally speaking, most people will react more favourably to a picture that has more space in front of a side facing person. As your subject is looking out of the frame, so to speak, cropping behind her would probably lift the whole picture.
That cropping would also eliminate the dark vertical lines behind her.
I would suggest you may wish to move this to the critique gallery, if you wish for some constructive comments.
Mick.
 
Great shot that will be infinitely better by cropping.
I'm surpised she isn't pitch black with that backlighting. Nice job
 

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