Wedding interior

This doesn't work for me. Without title i don't even see a wedding. Sorry.
Be creative. Make weddings dynamic, not static. Walk around and photograph the relatives and friends, details. The official wedding photographer takes care of the offical part....

I was the official wedding photographer.

This is the kind of shot that would, commercially, please the buyer because it has sentimental value that the "critical viewer" (i.e. all of us here on APUG) cannot see. Having said that, I would "gently" echo Marc's comments in that it more should have been done to make it successful as an "art piece".