Vivienne

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  Andrew Moxom

• May 10, 2007

Very nice image. Great use of selective focus!

 

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  darinwc

• May 10, 2007

I dont like how her elbow on the right was cropped yet the rest of her was left in the image on the left. I think it would be better to do a tighter crop to focus on her bust. Alternatively, it may be the pose that is distracting me.. it looks like her waist is bent considerably and thus her lower half 'sticks out' in a different direction.
Also, i dont care for the shadow behind her nose. From her eyes it looks like some on-camera flash was used for fill or maybee a window behind the camera.

 

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  Dietmar Wolf

• May 10, 2007

Good photo.

Just went to your website. Looked at the model photos. They are way too oversharped. You can easy see stairs. Looks really not good, although the pics themselves are nice!

p.s. just saw the other pics. for my taste, you flash too much and loose detail in the faces.

 

• Mark Mombarg

• May 10, 2007

Dietmar,

You are right about the website. Tried to build one myself, which is more difficult than I thought. It's not sharpening, but resizing of the images to a relative size. I did this in an attempt to overcome the issue of people having different monitors/resolutions, but it clearly causes trouble. Will work on it...

 

• vincedixon

• May 10, 2007

Agree with Andrew, great use of selective focus.

I like it very much.

Regards

 

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  JohnArs

• May 10, 2007

Pretty girl and very nice composition and focus!
Very well done. Armin

 

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  TN98

• May 10, 2007

ฺBeautiful picture.

 

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  Edimilson

• May 10, 2007

This is amazing. Everything is superb and the model is gorgeous. But I guess I would prefer to burn the highlights on her calves a little. It seems to me they might be too bright, as well as the area right behind the model's feet. Except for that, I wish I'd done this!

 

• laverdure

• May 11, 2007

I actually like the burned out highlights. Perhaps that's just my own warped taste, but they do draw the eye, and confuse my eye, to the point where I'm a little more curious about this picture than your average reclining nude. Very well done.

 

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  Eric Rose

• May 11, 2007

I quite like the above photo. I think the use of balance is well done, the use of tonality places the focus on her eyes which are beautiful and the arc of her form brings you right to the breast. Another standout feature.

As far as the website is concerned I have a couple of comments:
1. excellent photos, well conceived and executed.
2. English bio would be nice
3. you should have a "home" button on each page so you don't have to hit the back button a bunch of times to get back to the beginning.
4. on my monitor I did not find them over sharpened.