Vines

Vines

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  • DBP
I can't get this one to look the way I seem to think it should. Any ideas?
Location
Roosevelt Island, Washington, DC
Equipment Used
Anny Speed Graphic/ 127mm Ektar
Film & Developer
Classic 400/ Rodinal
Paper & Developer
Polycontrast/ Neutol
Yes. you have no point of central interest. It is a bunch of vines, which could be interesting, but there is too much else. SHOW ME what is catching your interest in this scene, and ONLY include that which adds to that. As is it is either way too much or way too little.
 
Also, change your angle of attack on this subject. Walk around it to get a better handle on this.
 

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vines.jpg
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