Thank you!
These were really just experiments, and I was annoyed there for failing to get the framing right. It's already a bit of a fight with a TLR and the Rolleinar adds to the parallax errors. I read somewhere that the Rolleinar had parallax correction but I looking at most of the frames that I got at the time, it either doesn't or I am an absolute ignorant working with them. And it's quite possible that it's the latter.
And there it is! After writing this answer, I was searching for some more details on the sets that I have and found some information that has me believing I probably have incomplete sets, which accounts for the troubles I had with parallax errors. Sadly this is information that I didn't find at the time.
I know it's a test and not what you wanted, but this one is a great start. I like the black background and tones throughout the subject. yes there are changes to make - good eye!