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Location
Stony Plain, Alberta
Equipment Used
Zone VI 4x5, Schneider 120mm Angulon
Exposure
Not recorded
Film & Developer
Kodak Tri-X
Collin, I like the relationship between the barn that leans and the tree that leans in the same direction. I like the composition and the over all effect. The only improvement I see is the snow is 1 shade too dark. I feel it should be lighter then the entire image would work for me. Just my opinion.
Gary
 
On my computer at least the snow is white-any more white and it would loose any detail-look at the top of the cart(with the barrel)it's pretty much paper white on my terminal at least.My wish(not really an opinion)would be to find the same decrepit barn with the tree and no other barn;a simpler composition(my own taste)-but this one works as well.It looks like the sky has more detail than I can makeout,how's the print?
jim
 

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Collin Orthner
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2290tree-on-farm.jpg
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