Twilight bikers

Twilight bikers

Kids messing about on their bikes in some abandoned port warehouse area.
Location
Wivenhoe, England
Equipment Used
Olympus OM1n, 28mm lens
Paper & Developer
Ilford MG IV FB, toned in Viradon
Nice shot but I think it could be improved with a different framing.
Cut the right door at the pole, the bottom in the very dark line, a bit on the left side after the electrical parts and some top part to get a nice balance between the sides.
 
I think you are right about the cropping on the right side, about the others I'm not so sure; but thank you for your suggestions. I like your work a lot, by the way.
 
I like this, it really imparts the atmosphere of an urban wasteland.
I would only crop the top 15mm or so of the frame, down to just above where the first light areas can be seen.
 
I like it, too. Makes me a little nervous about the possibilities, which adds to the tension in a good way - but then I'm a mom. Nice with the near and distant bike, and nice use of light and shadows.
 

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wivenhoe_bikers.jpg
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Date taken
Sat, 15 October 2005 11:59 PM
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