This has a very organic look to it. More enjoyable than the other picture you posted, if you ask me. When you print this, I suggest burning in the lower right hand corner.
Indeed, I like this one better as well, thank you for the burning suggestion (I think it was foam of sorts, but it draws attention)
This is my 19th shot with the Mamiya in total, so the only way from here is getting good at it =D