Tranquility

Trying to figure out how to best print this one. Any and all comments are welcome and greatly appreciated.

Thanks for looking.

Gary
Location
Asahi-mura, Niigata, Japan
Equipment Used
Wehman 8x10 & Fuji 300mm
Exposure
1min at f/64
Film & Developer
Fuji Acros 100 in D:76 1:1
Paper & Developer
Ilford MGIV in Dektol 1:3 Contact Print
Lens Filter
None
The far bank is distractingly bright, and could do with burning in, whilst, IMO the whole image needs a greater range of contrast. The interest is in the four large foreground rocks, concentrate our attention on those, and crop / hide the mess behind.
 
Hi Dave,

Thanks for the advice, I am going to try and reprint both of them in the next couple of days. Maybe I will go back to this spot and try again as well.

Thanx!

Gary
 

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