Very nice, makes me feel like I was there. I would consider cropping the top part of the frame, to just below the peak of the roof and also the left part, leaving a little space to the left of the rock. I think this would create a more intimate feel and eliminate some of the distracting elements near the top of the photo.
I think you did a great job with the timing, the woman walking into the picture really makes it work (for me at least). Thanks for sharing this!