The Swimmer

• ilya1963

• Aug 27, 2010

I love this as is ...I would keep it a is

 

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  Guillaume Zuili

• Aug 27, 2010

Waiting is 3/4 of pleasure... Some say, some don't...

On which side are you ?
As Ilya, I would keep 3 ways.

 

• OMU

• Aug 27, 2010

Keem them all tree,
to me, the combination of the tree of them is what makes the photo.

 

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  mooseontheloose

• Aug 27, 2010

I agree with the others -- I like all three together.

 

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  Marco B

• Aug 27, 2010

In terms of light and dark patches, it doesn't feel completely balanced with the left one included. I think this is what causes your doubts. The light patch on the left doesn't work as an "ending" to the total image. Maybe adding a fourth image, or using it is a the second one, will restore the balance...

 

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  jbridges

• Aug 27, 2010

I agree with Marco. If you moved the lighter image to the middle it would keep my eye centered and still make sense as a narrative. IMHO. By the way, it is a wonderful piece of art.

 

• Andrew Horodysky

• Aug 27, 2010

I think this is a great concept. Small series of three(s) works magic in terms of design, balance, linear story-telling, etc. Play with it...

Nice.

 

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  keithwms

• Aug 27, 2010

I think it works perfectly as a set of three, and I like this sequence too. Well done.

 

• AgentX

• Aug 27, 2010

Great image as it's assembled now.

 

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  bdial

• Aug 28, 2010

I like them as a set of 3. I'm in agreement with Marco and jbridges, if I were presenting them, I'd put the one on the left in the middle.