The Porch

Nice pattern on the roof, you have nailed the exposure and development , the bottom is a little soft.

That was intentional. I was experimenting. I should have also done the opposite to compare.

It had great potential but your 'intended' softening of the floor does not please David Lyga! However, you might repent for your dastardly deed, indeed, because you were 'experimenting'. That said, your choice of venue was appropriate and sane and tonally comprehensive. - David Lyga