The Night Trains

Several weeks ago I was able to participate in a night shoot of 2 iconic Norfolk and Western steam locomotives, the 611 and 1218. My goal that night was to capture the grace, power, and beauty of the 611, a classic Streamliner from the art deco period. Despite my best efforts, I ended up feeling that the picture I made of the 1218 was stronger than that of the 611, but in the soft glow of the darkroom the idea of presenting them as a diptych occurred to me.

I am interested in knowing if my idea stands the light of day, not to mention the critical eye of other photographers whom I respect. Thanks in advance for your comments.
Location
Roanoke, VA
Equipment Used
Linhof
Film & Developer
Ilford FP4+ in Obsidian Aqua
Paper & Developer
Ilford MGIV in LPD 1:2
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  1. Yes
The 1218 is sharper but the 611 looks as if it is moving at speed and the slight mistiness surrounding it gives it a kind of mystic quality. On balance the 611 may be the more powerful shot but both are very good
 
Dan both photographs are excellent but when put together they seem to compete with each other, with people opting for one loco or the other. I myself perfer loco 1218 because of the extra detail visible on it. I'm sure this is not the reaction you intended. Because the locos are seperating left and right the viewer is inclined to look at one loco only. What occured to me is if both locos were travelling in the same direction it would be easier for the viewer to take both of then in at the one look. This would mean that you would have to mirror one of them and see how they look. I understand that the loco number would be back to front but it is the overall combined images that I would concerned with.
 

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