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The calm

The calm just after a heavy rainfall.

Photographed using a Bronica ETRSi (645) and Ilford FP4+. Developed using D-76 1+1. Printed to MGIV. Slightly toned in selenium.

What could have been improved, composition wise and while printed? I am very much intrested in recieving your critique!
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Location
A small lake in the southern of Sweden
Film & Developer
Ilford FP4+ developed in D-76(1+1).
Paper & Developer
MGIV
Is this print for sale?
  1. Yes
dasBlute
This is a nice image.The only thing I would want is either have the near rushes out of the picture or completely surrounded by the calm water. As they are, the upper flowering parts are lost in the darks, and they also run out the edges, both of which-to my mind- reduce their effect as a main subject in the composition. The print values are nice and subtle, perfect for thissetting. Did I say? This is a nice image!
 
Thomas Bertilsson
Beautiful, poetic.
 
cliveh
A beautiful image.
 

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Device
NIKON CORPORATION NIKON D300
Aperture
ƒ/8
Focal length
34.0 mm
Exposure time
1/60 second(s)
ISO
200
Filename
952cfd5b0bbb63accddd8427a549dd62_608098.jpg
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Date taken
Sun, 30 October 2011 5:02 PM
Dimensions
850px x 600px

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