I thought this was a pretty decent composition until someone I showed it to said it looked too plain. I thought the extra negative space gave it more context.
I really like this type of stuff, so I don't know how objective I can be. I wonder if you could do a little post processing to boots some of the color? Either way, like I said, I like this type of stuff and this image. - Sean
I really like this one too, the negative space works well. Polaroid is a very underused medium these days and this is a fine example of the way they should be used. The only thing I can criticise is the slightly askew scanning.
Tony