I think this is a very well composed shot Ashley, with the girls off centre in the composition and horizon IMO is in the right place it has some nice tones of everything from deep black to pure white and various shade of grey in-between, to me it says a lot about what it's like to be a child. I really like this picture and would be happy if I had taken it.
Wonderful !!!
Their feet sinking in the sand reminds me of when was a kid and loved the beach. Actually I still love the beach and my feet sinking inot the sand.