stone wall

stone wall

Critique please! Does this shot work? Ideas on alternative and better way to compose or print this shot? All comments are welcome!

Best regards
Henrik
Location
Sweden
Equipment Used
Pentax 67ii, 90mm
Film & Developer
Ilford FP4+ EI64, D76 1+1
Paper & Developer
Adox MCC 110, LPD 1+2
Is this print for sale?
  1. Yes
I would crop a bit off the left hand side and the bottom which puts the tree in a stronger place and the wall becomes less of a barrier. Tony
 
wonderful image, i'd say. if possible, it might be nice to reduce the contrast of the rock wall. the contrast in the tree is fairly low, and though my eye wants to go there, the rocks in the front command a fair bit of attention because they pop or stand out more due to their higher contrast (imho).
 
I am a sucker for moss covered dry stone walls and this is lovely ~ In terms of composition - I too would take a small amount of the left hand side of the photo. ~ Martin
 

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