Statue on Wabash River

one of my earlier LF attempts, adjustments only to make the image on my screen look like the actual print
just wondered what others think of it
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Location
Vinncennes In
Equipment Used
Graphic View II with Schnieder 135
Exposure
nr
Film & Developer
Arista edu ultra 100 / D-76
Paper & Developer
ilford mg rc
Lens Filter
-
I think it's nice. Very soft interpretation. I think it would benefit from a straighter left-to-right horizon.
 
Agree with Horizontal being off and distracting. It just isn't working for me on any level. Keep at it.
 

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