Shutter - Allaire Row House 850
michaelorr

Shutter - Allaire Row House 850

I have an image in my gallery of same window, taken with a Rolleicord. I have never been satisfied with results of the 'cord, and recently captured a C330 with a 105mm DS lens. Man, i like the sharp of this. Not sure, though, that i like the composition as much as the previous photo.
Location
Allaire Village, Wall, NJ
Equipment Used
Mamiya C330, 105mm DS
Exposure
f16
Film & Developer
HP5 Plus; lab processed XTOL
Paper & Developer
lab scanned
Lens Filter
Yellow
This is nice. This composition gives more rich tones, light variation than the other. Clarity is better and very pleasing.
 
Appreciate your critical eye and constructive input, HiHo. I think now there was way too much brick wall in the previous photo, and you are right about the lighting. The other one was way too flat - i had thought that would be an asset in a photo like this, but i would be mistaken.
The new to me C330 i picked up recently is a fine delightful camera. I am enjoying the heck out using it - keep it with me most of the time now.
 
I like this shot also, the simplicity of the composition appeals to me. Being in the Critique Gallery prompts me to add that I feel you should have included all of the shadow of the locking device in the bottom LHS. Apart from that, it is a lovely shot.
 
Vincent, very good observation - i seldom recognize those details and i think it would have moved this image up at least a notch or two. Thank you!
 
very greatly appreciated, kreeger. I need comments like this when merited in order to understand better what is good in a photograph. i have admired much of your work, and especially liked your silo, recently.
 

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Shutter - Allaire Row House 850.jpg
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