She

She

Commisioned portrait of young woman.
Location
My studio in Indiana.
Equipment Used
Hasslblad 500cm and 150mm
Exposure
f8 @ 250/flash
Film & Developer
Ilford SFX 200
Paper & Developer
Brilliant / Zone VI
Reng deng... those eyes ! beautiful face & very delicate use of patterns in dress & background ! But why her arms like this ? doesn't do the lady credit & do I see text on/over her chest ?
 
I copyright the image with subtle text. She was holding the lace up... that is how the arms are where they are.
 
There is something strange going on in her right armpit & shoulder. It's the skin tone ? I would say: try/scan again :wink:
 
vpwphoto
i don't mind ( and really can't see ) the copyright information, and i can't see the other "stuff" people have mentioned
i really like how you have composed this, its almost as if the model
is behind a picket fence ( foreground ) with a forest of trees or vegetation behind her ..
and her arms outstretched remind me of a hindu goddess ...
maybe it is my old-fashioned-ness when it comes to traditional portraits

i was taught in my apprenticeship-days never to have the head so tight to the top of the frame.
... that would be my only criticism is the framing or her head is too close ...
the beautiful thing about rules are they are meant to be broken -
because cutting off her arms would have been a no no too ...
john
 
vpwphoto said:
I copyright the image with subtle text. She was holding the lace up... that is how the arms are where they are.
I think he means it looks like scratches on the film in her armpit, or blond hairy pits? lol, but seriously it's just like one or two scratches, is that just a bad scan/print or is that actually on the negative?
 

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